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  • Lots of inconsistencies!

    By Paiges2turn
    Students less than 2 years younger (16) are referred to as (children and little girls). Rae can hug and pat a girl on the back and not sense her secret tatu, let alone mimic it. I could go on and on...Still entertaining, but getting silly and sloppy.
  • Sloppy editing, major inconsistencies in storyline

    By LB123454321
    The protagonist has gone from short to petite, cautious to reckless, having a decent memory, to a photographic one, to now apparently nonexistent (the author conveniently has her learn many details anew for added drama). The basic rules of the world she's created are inconsistently applied, and changed to fit the moment and conversation (tatus arrive on a 16th birthday - but a 14 y/o has one. Dating between tatus is frowned upon, taboo, but now also apparently illegal.).